Penelope Cross

As much as I don't like these kinds of rhyming poems, I have to say this surprised me. When I started reading I kind of thought this wouldn't be good, ...

So, um, not really feeling this. It's good and has a good concept, but it could be better, a lot better. The world is an oyster I am the pearl ...

Life And Love The first two lines are nice, but the third line doesn't seem to fit that well though. I feel like it's just kinda thrown in there, I ...

First off, this is a great poem, I love the imagery, it really made me feel like (1 Spring is a little girl and (2 you tend to get a ...

That solitary good-bye from those who we pre-mourn... Does but little to comfort the grieving soul. The opening stanza feels a little weak. And to be honest, it kind of ...

She has scars on her wrists that slowely heal, but every time they heal she reopens them. The first line makes me not like this poem automatically, to be honest. ...

Aware of the situation, aware of the wingless creation, as all greedily descend, to give life a dramatic end, Given the title of the topic is WWII, starting off with ...

Well, this poem isn’t bad, but you need to brush it up a bit. Also, my suggestions, if you’re going to rhyme, I’d really put a lot of effort into ...

I really don't think this is too great of a poem. To be honest, it feels like two or three different poems that have been spliced together roughly. Some stanza's ...

You never came. Full of broken promises from the start No, before even. Did you think that some money and a hello kitty clock would make it up? Maybe if ...

So, firstly, this is my first review, so...good luck to us both, eh? If I could leave you I'd break free unlock my door and throw the key into the ...